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"Brains Blow"
  by Styles C


Raise status quo?

Stumped growth
Although (they)
Still stretch necks from the back row

Contemporary Flow
Nostalgic quotes
Questionable antics
Capsized… bottomed hopes
Aligning cliff notes

Conceptualize
Themes techniques
That lack or demean
For lack of a scene
Still
Just stagnant dreams

Structured thoughts
Cause comparisons
Raise more than an eyebrow or two
Push higher
Still
failing to break through

Midget minor
Morphing into
Horizontals Amazing grace
where
Vertical ascents
Lack proper support in open space

Direct interdiction
Thoughts need Mental coalitions
Collaborative effort to
End stagnation

Time for Brains to Blow

Letha Brainz Blo - Heltah Skeltah

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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (12:01 AM)
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  HOLLA @ UR GUR...
08/04/08 (09:52 AM) 
LMFAOOOOOOOOO, alrighty then.......

  TRU-IN-DEED
07/24/08 (02:42 PM) 
Man i would qoute but if i did, i would only be qouting the same line one did lol. But yea fam i think i grasp what you're tryin 2 say with this write....dopeness yet again. - T.I.D.

  Blakfiya
07/24/08 (12:08 PM) 
Yes....I feel a sense of stagnation myself. Don't know if its a wide-spread affliction, but when you're feeling this way - inspiration comes from the most unlikely places. Nice write, love the metaphor.

  OjosDeAngel
07/24/08 (09:07 AM) 
Thoughts need mental coalitions collaborative effort to end stagnation.... wow...

  .Still.Cat.
07/24/08 (07:20 AM) 
Heltah Skeltah???...smdh...you can find me where Candice be...in the got damn bubble man

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