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"BRAIN BOXING"
  by GOD_OF_WAR_7


Brain boxing
Knocking around mind malformed malfunctions
A creative form of escaping manumit malediction malignancies
My strategic virtual solutions to everyday problem solving
As I'm mathematically constructing a modern day phenomenon
By transforming and shaping thrown away trashed compound combustibles combinations
Locked inside my prestigious pressurized psycho lab
Stirring measured modified ingredients
Along with adding additional variants of valid velocities
Which are all assumed as being illegal uncontrollable substances
But worrying me not
For this is a most important task
Dealing with the highest degrees of accuracy is the only way to achieve
For I must be precise in my every findings

Working constantly around the clock
Carefully configuring fundamental realms of redefined scientific evolution
Making myself a nonprofit entity
As I'm always studying
Formalizing facts
Researching
Testing the laws of theoretical relativity
Analyzing supported evidence through my rigorous mirrored observations
Training recently awakened brainwaves
Self injecting controversial concepts
While seeking developmental spiritual systems to download into my complex psychological database

I'm a forever evolving energized think tank
Thriving off of undefeatable primary technical thoughts
Expressing various ideological positive poetic views
Focusing mainly on intellectual will and sheer initiative wisdom to overcome
Offering non-partisan policies to my innovative ways of becoming a better individual
This secret supernatural explanation has become of history changing great success

Now I must patten my intellectual intelligent designs
I can feel thieving flocking host hacking flies are zeroing in for my miraculous discovery
But they'll find it not
For it only exist in my genetically enhanced mutating matter

I am the urban street scientist bringing forth a new pure prosperous form of meditation
Called "Brain Boxing"

Which will hit the open market soon
So be prepared to seek change within self..........................
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Date Submitted: Oct 27, 2008 (10:58 AM)
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  Mbé
11/19/08 (06:33 AM) 
you are a lyrical genius! conceptually flawless and excecuted excellently, crazy respect for the skill. "mind malformed malfunctions"- thats too ill =)

  --->ROXIE<---
11/16/08 (10:54 AM) 
this was such a dope concept! "Locked inside my prestigious pressurized psycho lab Stirring measured modified ingredients Along with adding additional variants of valid velocities Which are all assumed as being illegal uncontrollable substances " <---fav part!! and hell yeah im wit Fiya...ima be waiitn on the infomercial to hit T.V. so i can order me a supply..lol...dope!

  ASympl3Diamond
10/28/08 (12:02 AM) 
"Knocking around mind malformed malfunctions A creative form of escaping manumit malediction malignancies My strategic virtual solutions to everyday problem solving As I'm mathematically constructing a modern day phenomenon By transforming and shaping thrown away trashed compound combustibles combinations Locked inside my prestigious pressurized psycho lab"---my goodness ya openers are always on fiya! i am diggin them lines!!! good shit once again

  Mr. RTJ
10/27/08 (10:57 PM) 
this was hot on so many different levels. the flow of course is smooth yet tongue twisting. you really have to engulf yourself in it to catch the meaning but then again to me it seems that in itself is the underlying meaning. "Making myself a nonprofit entity" feeling that as it shows the drive to remain true and uncorrupted. "I'm a forever evolving energized think tank" a true calling as an artistic and creative mind never spots. this brain boxing has my brain boxing, thanks for the sample.

  iva
10/27/08 (12:50 PM) 
great write man great title as well

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