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"Blood of the Purest..."
  by Snickaz


As it drips from the victim,
And the mouth,
I watch,
For it is their tim to come out,
I've been hiding,
And pretty well at that,
Now I'm watching them feed,
It's so appauling,
Yet it drags you in,
The technique,
Their ability to do what I never will,
Just trying to survive,
As they thrive on that purity,
Oh no I've been spotted,
Their staring straight at me,
Now my feet pull me forward,
Away from the creatures of night,
I forgot completely that they could fly,
Because above I see them in flight,
I scream in fear,
Because they are closer than they appear,
Near me,
They catch up to lil old me,
Surrounded I am,
Terrified,
And interestd in how it feels,
To be bitten,
Used as a source of food,
But them again death is its ending,
And I have more to do,
But the more I think,
The closer they get,
I was attacked,
My defenses were futile against the creatures,
And I had then experienced what the bite for the purest felt like,
It felt like death...
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Date Submitted: Sep 11, 2008 (11:50 PM)
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  DJ-GZeus
11/25/08 (02:48 PM) 
damn...this was an incrediablly gripping story...I really liked reading this and I dont even know where to begin, but this was really great...nicely written shorty...keepy at it...ten stars from me

  WISDOM21
11/25/08 (05:16 AM) 
VERY ORIGINAL..THE IMAGERY IN THIS PIECE IS OUTSTANDING.. 10 STARS MA..MUCH LOVE AND RESPECT

  datgirlbg
11/21/08 (11:47 PM) 
10 stars from me. this reminds me of a vampire. and i love true blood.

  unique1luv
11/21/08 (11:29 PM) 
Oh....Very....different.I loved it.I thought i was the only person qho thought and wondered about creatures such as the ones described in this piece.Loved the imagery,the mystery....all 10 from me

  Nikkii*3
11/14/08 (08:01 PM) 
..Wow! .. I'm speechless... This is amazing... So well written... Ten stars isn't even enough!! Well done.

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