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"Blinded"
  by caramel_skin


What about me I cry
Inside as I lye
Awake as I contemplate
The situation now staring me in the face
Trying to place
Physical signs
Should've been reading in between the lines
Guilt heavily weighing me down
Mentally shielding eyes blocking ears to drown the sound
I'm sorry escapes my lips
Now drying my eyes with my fingers tips.
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Date Submitted: Jul 02, 2008 (04:55 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (17)
  williesidney
11/16/08 (09:03 AM) 
This was a real good write just keep blessing others with the gift from God that you have just keep writting and a big ten stars.

  Jonathan Robin...
11/13/08 (01:34 PM) 
"Applauding".....you're just a natural born poet. No Question about it!

  KNYNE
09/02/08 (02:21 PM) 
excellent write...that's it i'm most definitely saving you as one of my fav poets. keep doing ya thang, gyrl!!!

  angeleyes1
08/18/08 (06:47 PM) 
very nicely written and some deep emotions expressed keep flowing with your words much love

  ♥Poetic~...
08/03/08 (02:55 PM) 
short but very emotional. i can feel what you were going through in this. 10**

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