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"Blazing Mind"
  by Arcane


Thugluv challenge..A picture is 1,000 words. . 15 lines

Hiding behind a disguise, she smiles with half a grin,
Pretending that life, and hope still lives deep within,
But she’s worn and torn, as she sits in a mist of misery,
Hiding her heartaches behind her burning eyes,
Mirrored images that haunt her,
She realize she’s seeking hope behind a shattered glass,
With sirens ranging in her mind, tearing her in half,
She’s lost and cursed with every breath she takes,
Her soul burns deep within with constant battles,
Her heart’s battered, wounded and drained,
Shattered, rapped…..and finally dead,
She sits, waiting eagerly for time to tick away, as death calls her name,
With muffled sounds that drown her heart, and sets her mind ablaze,
Leaving lasting impression with a smell of blood, suicidal thoughts that fill her desire,
She dies with in her madness, setting her soul ablaze, finally creating her final act…


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Date Submitted: Jul 28, 2008 (04:57 PM)
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  *Miss Toya*
09/25/08 (03:44 PM) 
i didn't even have to see the picture....the words in themselves were deep as hell...this the part that got me though "She’s lost and cursed with every breath she takes, Her soul burns deep within with constant battles, Her heart’s battered, wounded and drained, Shattered, rapped…..and finally dead,"

  Guey2
09/17/08 (11:24 PM) 
Intense is the only word that comes to mind as i read this. at first i took it to be a poem about life and then about poetry. im not certain but maybe its neither and both at the same time. poetry's meaning lies in the ey of the beholder i suppose. yo dope work really got me wanting to understand to its fullest.

  sweet tee a.k....
09/12/08 (09:28 AM) 
yes this is marvelous beautifully writteen

  lyric1985
08/18/08 (02:30 PM) 
this was very thought-provoking piece, ma...a very remarkable piece indeed...loved it 10 from me... xoxoxoxoxo lyric

  mindigoblue
08/14/08 (12:00 AM) 
That was really intense. I can feel the emotion in this. Definitely able to relate to much of the anger and frustration expressed here. Very nicely done in 15 lines.

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