damn.. first off the song goes beautifully with this poem and the bg adds to that.. i always loved this song..and it relates to me in a real way!!! now for the poem..there were so many things i wanted to quote but when i got to this part i had to stop..and reread it... "...consequences of ill construction
brought upon in daylight hours existence
when the purity of intent,
lost its innocence..." WOW.. im like blown away auntie.. damn.. im like not even sure what else to say..painfully beautifuL!
DAMN! you are just too too much! The wordplay and the imagery in this piece is so off the hook, not to mention how dope the concept is alone. Like wow.. honestly, you never cease to amaze me madam i.b. - T.I.D.
you will never be broken by the Sun you will shine brighter than it does when the light illuminates your beauty...but i'll hang in the dark with you..*wink*....lol...great job of painting me another vivid picture..