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"Before I knew it… Part 2...Per Request"
  by Ye Cre


Before I knew it you had won my heart
Golden fall days while walking the park arm to arm
Enjoying your honest smile and your sweet charm
Flying kites and water fights on a summer’s day
Holding your body close while we kiss at sunset
Has this been a sweet dream if it is don’t wake me
Can he really be digging me or is this an infatuation
Taking me by surprise you look deep into my eyes
Reassuring me that you are willing to show me love
My mind fluttering like butterflies in the big blue sky
It’s like I can feel happiness in the pit of my soul
We living we loving we talking we cooperating and
All I can say before I knew it you gave me a ring.

You want some more>>>Part 3?>>> We'll see:)
Thanks, you just witnessed a YE CreATION!

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Date Submitted: Jul 30, 2008 (05:05 AM)
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  soultrytongue
09/04/08 (02:46 PM) 
awwww....this is how love always starts out...but will it last..lets see in part 3..good piece hun

  Diemenz
08/21/08 (07:29 PM) 
ok looking goood i love part 1, 2 is cool 2

  chocolaetreat
07/31/08 (04:59 PM) 
COME ONNNNNNN.... YOU KNOW YOU SHOULD HAVE KEPT IT GOING... I KNOW YOU BETTER HURRY UP DIVA TO PART THREE SO I CAN READ 1 - 3...... I LOVED IT THANKS FOR CONTINUING TO MOVE DA PEN!

  Ordained Misfi...
07/30/08 (10:57 AM) 
Loved Part 1, and now I'm even more in love with Part 2. Part 3 is a must! Wedding bells? Great as ususal!

  Pookiejr
07/30/08 (05:34 AM) 
Imaginations definitely took me places on this one. What you describe in this piece is like the perfect situations you will love to be in with that special someone. 10 stars all the way. I was going to like it anyway because its coming from you. LOL!

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