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"Beautiful"
  by Tha Scorpion


I luv to see her smile
Tho, she's masking internal pain
But thru it all, the up's and down's
The luv we share remain's the same

When you cry I cry
And when you hurt I hurt
I swear you never understand
Just exactly what you're worth

If I could I'd take you from daily stress
Show you luv and put ya on a Godly quest
Kiss your lips so you'd know real luv
Kiss ya lips so you'd fly like a dove

Tho you see you and you see ya flaws
I see you all still luv you thru it all
When you're down I wanna pick you up
I admit it, you sexy girl, I'd still fuck

This ain't about dat tho, this is gratitude
I luv ya cocky, out spoken, intelligent attitude
That smile you have melts me deep inside
To care for you is equal to that of pride

You'll be my baby for my life's duration
Lovin' you is always a cause for celebration
Nothing is greater than a man lay down his life for another
I'd lay down mine for yours, I'm just like another brother

Phsyically, you're awesome
Mentally, your incredible
Baby, trust me....you're beautiful

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Date Submitted: Nov 09, 2008 (12:13 PM)
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  Harmony07
11/13/08 (03:54 AM) 
awwwwww....i must admit that i'm lovin L0v3 poemz right now for no dayum reason...smh but this is mos def a fave!

  Juicy1on1
11/10/08 (12:46 AM) 
This definitely exposes the loving side of you and sometimes we need to hear it from a man's point of view that we are beautiful and needed and wanted and sexy etc. even when were not feeling it on the inside. I really enjoyed.

  Blakfiya
11/09/08 (04:01 PM) 
:) Beautiful, Essy. This would really brighten a woman's day to read and know it was true.

  BlessedOne
11/09/08 (03:33 PM) 
This is so beautiful. I love it when you allow your sensitive side to show. And yes, we all have flaws, but it's the love inspite of that is so prevelant in your words.

  *Miss Toya*
11/09/08 (03:01 PM) 
I know you put this under love...but it is so uplifting it could have been inspirational....very nice drop...."When you're down I wanna pick you up I admit it, you sexy girl, I'd still fuck " now see why you do that...lol

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