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"BATTLE FIELD."
  by Ms. Hollywood


I don't think I asked for this but this is what GOD gave me.
Mentality is crazy, but this is just how GOD made me.
Now lately, the number of enemies done rose greatly.
Drama; is really starting to aggravate me.

For a reason they want my head, for a reason they want me dead.
What reason I don't understand, but examples I gotta spread.
I dread, the fact I gotta send my enemies to hell.
Just gotta make sure that I pick up all the shells.

No peace, no sleep, I need re-lease.
It's a struggle mayne, hard out here, who else want me?-Police.
Authority on my ass, but I ain't tryna catch a case.
Been running around lately, so I'm down for a chase.

They know It's blood on my hands, they just looking for the Proof.
The proof in my liquor, But I aint got the juice.
Catchin bodies left and right, i need to fall back.
I'm startin to slip, aint on my shit, I can't leave no traces, no tracks.

Subject, Suspect, Killer, Connect:

I'm the main subject they want to talk about.
I suspect I got some snitches that opened up they mouth.
Enemies lurkin, they know where I lay my head.
Ran up in my crib woke my momma up out the bed.
Gotta call, that told it all, I Connected all the facts.
My blood boiling, Blood gets spilled on impact.

KILLER.....I killed her, and..... him too.
Bullet Bullet!! two shots to the head for each one who violated home.
Don't believe me? well I always make sure when I shoot bullets catch domes.
My life's on a front line, I'm in the battle field.
The truth I no longer shield; It's now revealed.
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We fightin for survival, we fightin to live.
I'm fightin for a way out, when I die I wanna have something to give.
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Date Submitted: Jan 21, 2008 (01:42 AM)
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  MR. BYRD
08/27/08 (02:26 PM) 
um....this entire write is really good...real talk...i mean the first lines blew me away and the rest just...i don't know but anyway...strong and powerful....continue to push that pen..much love....10 and a fave......B-Y

  JuztBe
08/27/08 (09:53 AM) 
whoa ma this was deep and sadly the identity of most african american teenagers excellent picture painted ma

  ASympl3Diamond
08/26/08 (05:09 PM) 
"I don't think I asked for this but this is what GOD gave me. Mentality is crazy, but this is just how GOD made me"---the opening line hits so close to my heart..."We fightin for survival, we fightin to live. I'm fightin for a way out, when I die I wanna have something to give"---same here!!!

  B3yond R3d3mpt...
03/11/08 (12:09 PM) 
there you go yo that was a powerful poem gotta give it to you on dis one ya did ya thing and the last two lines was crazy!!!!

  Mojo JoJo
02/13/08 (12:47 AM) 
This is intense hiding out I see lol bullets to the dome damn strong write keep up the great work 10strz

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