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"Baby Girl"
  by Blakfiya


Baby Girl

Grow before you let him know your secrets
Take time to develop feelings
Sit thyself upon a pedestal
and dare he to strike you down
Do not become lost
and then found by garbage men,
treated like trash,
or recycled collection
Require a purchase agreement connection
before offering a fragment of precious affection

If you in the mirror,
saying I love you,
is the only attention you get...
revel in that
because too many seek fulfillment in lust's tragic bewilderment
Having to learn again to stand and spot a worthy man
due to scars deforming

Develop goals and put blinders on
until their horizons you have advanced upon
and then choose one who can further the dream
of reality crowning you as its queen
and I promise once there, you will see
That the love you receive
is the good love you'll need

Cause...

Baby, girl
women are not born everyday
its an acquired disposition




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Date Submitted: Nov 15, 2008 (10:39 PM)
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  --->ROXIE<---
11/16/08 (10:42 AM) 
them last few lines!!! dammit fiya!! so fuckin true...i hope wjoever u wrote this for hears u loud and clear...i know a few who could benefit from reading this

  Demon of Darkn...
11/16/08 (04:01 AM) 
IM GOING WITH THE FLOW HERE, YOU SHOULD MOST DEFINATELY SHOWCASED THIS JOINT!!! NO DOUBT ABOUT IT.. CUZ LOT OF YOUNG WOMEN DO NOT HOLD THEMSELVES IN HIGH REGARD WHEN THEY SHOULD.. DANG DIS PIECE REACHES OUT...EVEN MY GURL WEN READING IT SAID , THESE WORDS ARE SO TRUE...YEP YOU HELD IT DOWN.. NOW GO SHOWCASE IT PLEASE.. ILL SENT YO MASSIVE CREDITS.. MAD LOVE AS EVER DK

  Magic101
11/16/08 (01:25 AM) 
wow this iz a powerful inspirational piece. this delivers a great positive message. very well written. 10 starz

  GOD_OF_WAR_7
11/16/08 (01:20 AM) 
Phenomenal queen. Outstanding in many ways. Definitely loving this. This should showcased for most all the young ladies on here to see. Great masterpiece............

  Jody
11/16/08 (01:12 AM) 
wonderin' why this is not showcased? I shoud send you some creds ; )

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