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"BABY BOY"
  by GOD_OF_WAR_7


Baby boy

America's considered troubled nightmare
Deemed as an endangered species
Cited for aggressive, offensive behavior
Explicitly expressing a chaotic complex demeanor
Pathologically involved in the finger pointing scheme
Underperforming
Holding hard to this so-called value gap slave mentality
Not caring about the sacrifices of black history past time anyway
What ashame

Baby boy

For what cause are you selling yourself cheap
Gambling with extroverted delinquency
Becoming running wild uncontrollable livestock
Senselessly murdering each other for misunderstanding's revenge
Savagely thinking that guns can make one seem tough
Binging blamed problems on unsettled resentment
Portraying the ignorant roles of fake gangsters
Really just scared pranksters in disguise
Playing the primary role of pulverizing humans like slaughtered poultry
Empathizing on the usage and selling of illegally prossessed drugs
Not seeing these ill-gotten conducted consequences
Because of giving up too easily
Confusing movies on tell-lies-visually with real life reality
Glamorizing disrespect and hopelessness as liberated qualities
But becoming nothing more than ghetto's thrown away trashed commodities
Filling gluttony's bloody garbage pits
Falling prey just like evil predicted we would
Throwing up foolish gang signs
Claiming you rep-ping your government own hood

Baby boy

Why be the manipulated media's made fun of guilty prone
The disobedient anti-social clone
Terrorizing his mother already torn apart broken home
Brewing developed hostility in very hostile environments
Acting as if being hard and fronting an unfriendly disposition is a job application's requirement
Though social inequalities exist
Why not convert those conquered inferior feelings frailing fears and strive towards your vacated kingdom
Loose those self pity practices
Take back your priceless once bestowed golden crown
Seek knowledge for the notions of consciousness awareness
Learn to embrace history's heritage and live black empowerment
This is important not only for yourself
But also for the helping fulfillment for those around you

Remember that life is a privilege and no one is promised tomorrow
Count your blessings
Even if there seems to be none
Let the royal king qualities of you shine like never before
Growing into responsible manhood is truly a gift that not many have the chance nor opportunities to achieve

Baby boy

Please take heed to these uplifting liberating words of advice
For the cause that your survival is a must
If we are to have futures of tomorrow
Realizing your destiny will be a wonderful thing...........................
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Date Submitted: Nov 17, 2008 (09:43 PM)
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  IceyMa
11/27/08 (11:35 PM) 
Wow hun...that when deep. Though provoking issues and overall jus a great write. Def 10.

  ~*~QU33N~MA3~*...
11/23/08 (07:30 PM) 
I LOVE THYS SHAWTY I STRAIGHT DYGGS DYS

  ASympl3Diamond
11/23/08 (12:36 PM) 
"Baby boy Why be the manipulated media's made fun of guilty prone The disobedient anti-social clone Terrorizing his mother already torn apart broken home Brewing developed hostility in very hostile environments Acting as if being hard and fronting an unfriendly disposition is a job application's requirement Though social inequalities exist Why not convert those conquered inferior feelings frailing fears and strive towards your vacated kingdom Loose those self pity practices Take back your price...
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  KiNg-Go0B3r
11/22/08 (05:06 PM) 
WOW interesting view on this subject for real bruh i agree with some of this keep it real with the pen

  A.C.H.
11/21/08 (06:44 PM) 
I am feeling your philospophical nature in this write. As an elementary school teacher I see a lot of the boys who hail from single-parent (mother) households are the main ones who make excuses and feel they are not responsible for their actions and blame others for what they have done and the responsibility does not lie upon themselves. We as a black society have tried to "rationalize" what these boys have done instead of pointing them in the right direction... a direction that does not lead ...
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