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"Away"
  by Vocab Vixen aka inmymindseye


Take me away from this world of stress and confusion. Never being able to stop, like the clock our time is ticking away. Everyone so caught up in their own need, greed, and percetion of what should be. So tired of all the crazy world that cant seemt to take a deep breath and let it all out. Oppression feels more complete as everyone in their daily life has to compete. For what?.. what glory.. what riches? They mean nothing to me as i sit and watch their greed consume them. Take me away to a place so quiet and free from the disease of the mind. I want the wind caressing my body, stretching out my hair to its full length as i close my eyes, pretending to be a bird flying through the skies.I wanna open my eyes and see peace of the forest as everything is quiet and still except for the free animals roaming about their daily lives. Why cant we be free like them? Let the truely strongest win rather than the corrupt and decietful. I wanna her the songs of the birds as the fly about the sky while i look up shielding my eyes from the sun's freeing rays of light. My soul takes flight. Up into the heavens where celestial bodies play their harmonious song with no hate , no selfishness, with a blind eye to how different we all are seeng us all in an equality. Take me to the beach with the waves crashing upon the sand , mushing in between my toes as i feel more connected to the earth, feeling my soul's rebirth. Take me away to a place far from the reach of society. Take me Away.
~Charity
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Date Submitted: Aug 15, 2008 (06:12 PM)
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  williesidney
08/17/08 (12:24 PM) 
Wow nicw wirte just keep doing what you are doing ten stars.

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