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"At Your Door...[Wonderland]"
  by Disoriented "Lushus" Diva
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Outside Your Door by *!&DisorienTated Jokette&...


Green Light - John Legend feat Andre 3000

So I Gain Entry Within Your Door Yet,

...I stand between the framework of your Darkened Doorway and
For one moment...I was not sure how to proceed...

Encountering a lost heart within my Peripheral...

Confused Was I...whether to waltz in or not...as if it pertained to me...My Place
in a new..Space...?

Did I Rightfully Gain all the Intangible Assets that came with this Occupation?

So I Shyly Press One foot inside this place I hoped and prayed and wished so much for...Although cool it remains cozy enough for A Company of TWO to reside...

I Question and Analyze this Crucial Moment...A Climax in my life...Willingly Forcing my Way Up a the Highest Mountain and Finally When I Walk Past the Plateau I Don't know how to Exactly...Come Through...

You Opened it...But am I TO Follow You?

A Dazed Alice in a Wonderland...Unsure...Whether to explore...and See what Treasures can be Found or Return to reality and see...that you opened for another...it had nothing to do with me.

In Swirls Seeing Variations of Colors and Shapes...A Large Smile Protruded that gave me the Shakes....

I've Loved you Before...Despite the Madness of this Cup of Tea...but it seems i keep getting pressed for time...A Queen of Hearts bellows for my existence...and Yet...The Guards seem to...Object to this.

Swirling along with Twiddle Dee(Hopes) and Twiddle Dumb(Fears) Neither trekking back Nor progressing.

As I...Call Your Name...Echoing Within the Dim Darkness...Falling Unexpectedly...I Fall in a Spot Too Small for me to fit...or is it that what I am offering is too BIG?

Trying to Play my Cards Right Yet...Missing the Aces...despite Checkmating the Soldiers Pass our Gates...Within a Maze...I Keep Loop de Looping Hoping just once...I Could End Up...in a Confident Situation...

Speared and Encountering Injuries along the way...Induced by Smoking Caterpillars who refused to Evolve...and

the Butterflies i had in my belly couldn't compare...The Key still outta Reach...that will allow me light...
I tear up...out of frustration and cry...nearly Drowning in tears...

Yet...eventually I Wake up Remembering...The only thing to fear is fear itself...
Amazingly Enough...I Gather Courage...and Cautiously...Enter...into the Shallow Areas of your Heart...Knowing Somewhere there is a Place...

Slowly...Following at a Turtle's Pace...Since Slow and Steady...Wins the Race...

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Date Submitted: Oct 26, 2008 (05:42 PM)
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  11th Wonduh
12/24/08 (03:08 AM) 
this resembles a flow i.b would scribe. i like the confliction of emotions, from uncertainty to sureness w/ bits of wisdom. well said sistuh

  PoiZen
10/26/08 (11:21 PM) 
As always your words induce thought and stir emotions oh so well

  STYLES C.
10/26/08 (06:23 PM) 
outta sight!!! a hard act to follow and i want to write in the worse way

  One
10/26/08 (05:47 PM) 
You always think outloud...lol...in poems...in conversations...in general...I feel you...I love walking through progressions with you...seems the message is "I'm ready...but not so fast"...which makes me wonder what exactly has you ready at this moment...hmmm...*ponderin

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