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"As Father's Day Comes Around"
  by Lushus


It seems only a few hours ago i suffered one of the greatest losses.
Losing a love that no one can replace because despite mistakes, the feelings are always flawless
Wrote a four page letter with tears smudging every word, plus my left hand didn't make it better
I cried and I let out every emotion But Still
I wanted to Celebrate My Father
Happy I am for him to have been My Hero
Despite the blasphemy of the family, he was number 0, Infinite in himself
Through Sickness and through Health
He always fought for the best; the best for me, the best for his family, and the best for his country
I miss you so much especially when you would get angry at me
Hell I even think back on how you beat me
But it wasn' t abuse back in the day folks you know how parents do
Papi, standing at 6 feet, an angry glare, and intellectual mind
I looked up to you all of the time.
The strength of your character never left me surprised.
Wish you didn't have to leave our side.
No longer do you suffer from decaying, blood sugar pains, your were saddened and still you hurted without saying anything or complaining
My papi even as you aren't hear you haven't left me
I look at your Diplomas and say that will be me.
My inspiration, my will's partly dedication, my poetical genetic creation,
My father was my best friend, my teacher, favorite story teller, book buyer, favorite writer, and FAVORITE PROUDEST HAITIAN
Happy Father's Day.
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Date Submitted: Jun 15, 2007 (06:55 PM)
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  babyboy164
07/22/07 (08:13 PM) 
I am really sorry for you trust...right now I can truely saying I know exactly how it feels to lose some one whom you love...

  Jai-Smooth
06/16/07 (01:02 AM) 
This was a beautiful poem. I can relate so much, cuz I lost my father at a really young age. U really poured ur heart out on this one. Good JOB!! ~That Gurl JaiSMooth!~

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