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"...and TOGETHER, THEY said"
  by imperfect beauTy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem ...and he said by imperfect beauTy


Finally, a sigh of defeat escaped,
her lips, agape.

She didn't want to fight,
just yearned to see a slight

Hint of hope,
from a stoic entity

The semblance's of concern, a trace of vulnerability

He

--
shouted...
'' just give me one fucking minute to express what I need to say...!''
--

Fearful not,
of appearing weak,
Flooding his cheeks,
Were streams
of shattered dreams

--
...and he said
...''girl you are, to me...
all that a woman should be
and I dedicate my life...to you always..''
--

...and she said
''oh boy, I love you so...
I can't find enough ways to let you know...''
her voiced trailed off..alongside his pride

..TOGETHER they cried..
always - atlantic starr





--------

The future remains a mystery...
but all mistakes can and must be forgiven today

All prior moments that have elapsed,
are officially the past,
and there is where they shall lay

..and stay..


Within a couples common wear and tear remains


Mishaps,
are human nature
What distinguishes ''them'' from all the rest,
is the fact that a lesson learned is made of wrongdoings,
instead of them being stored in future references bins,
to be conjured and utilized maliciously as a tool to fuel angry flames

Misdeeds,
are a fallible humans tendencies,
and although
''im sorry'', is not a cure all,
IT IS A STEP,


towards betterment


Outer interference will never penetrate
the firm foundation
of their ''we''

As long as they comprehend that the only opinions holding substantial value,
are the love lyrics of he and she
-------

Hands clasped firmly,
a representation, that exists, no room, for the dismantling of their foundation

Brick by brick they continued to blockage the bullshit, barricade the debilitating ability of a harsh outside[rs] manipulation

Together,
they proudly stood,
as a testament that love can conquer all, when their is no obstacle from the outskirts, allowed to infiltrate

From that second forth
They lived ONLY for ''them'', for ''they'',
was of every breath they did take

...and he said

...''girl you are, to me...
all that a woman should be
and I dedicate my life...to you always..''


And forever,
together
weathering any & every monsoon,
within loves warm cocoon
...is where they stayed...

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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (01:50 PM)
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  Chocolate City
08/16/08 (04:50 PM) 
awwww now this was sooo sincere.. keep goin.. im lovin it..

  LiquidFire
08/16/08 (11:48 AM) 
*damn crying* that did it for me!!! Beautiful, this is how love should be done

  chocolaetreat
08/12/08 (01:28 PM) 
I loved each part of this from the beginning poem to this one... I just love your style, creativity, you are indeed a great writer...one of my favs!

  IjusWannaBE
08/06/08 (01:49 AM) 
beautiful....this write was a beautiful way to bring closer to the collection----it reminds us(male & female) what it is to be in a true "through the good n bad" type relationship-something that MANY NOWnDays dont know about,,,kudos ..this should be @ the end of wedding vows-lol

  DaRk KnIgHt
08/01/08 (06:11 AM) 
AND SHE SAID OH BOY I LOVE YOU SO... I CANT FIND ENOUGH WAYS TO LET YOU KNOW HER VOICED TRAILED OF ALONGSIDE HIS PRIDE.. INCREDIBLE DEPTH OF EMOTION THROUGH OUT THE WHOLE DROP.. IM LURVING IT FROM START TO FINISH.. HOW COULD I HAVE LOST TOUCH IN READING YOUR FLOW.. BOWS HEAD ASHAMED..TIGHT DROP AS EVER DK

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