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"AND STILL I REMEMBER (AWAKEN)"
  by DCpoet34
  - This Poem is a response to the poem And still I remember(slumber) by One


Afraid to love
Afraid to live
Afraid to offer
This love I have to give

Her leaving
Brought out the worst in me
She was the first...for me
Love hurts...for me

In the bed
One side is warm
One side is cold
Dreams keep me company
Awaken to no one to hold

Awaken to a reality
Full of Fallacy
One day, my eyes will know happiness
And one who hurts will imagine me
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Date Submitted: Apr 30, 2008 (09:26 PM)
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  bbeauty
06/22/08 (11:26 PM) 
I WAS REALLY FEELING THIS POEM YOU PUT YOU FOOT ON THIS PIECE. THIS REALITY WRAP UP IN A NUT SHELL. B BLESS

  lovely Lil Kie...
05/11/08 (03:25 AM) 
The flow was hot... I can relate... Been there done that... But we get over it and eventually find true happiness... Nice write... Keep your pen in motion poet.

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