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"...and she said"
  by imperfect beauTy


Alone,
she felt.
left to grovel on the grounds of heartbreak,

hands soiled and blending within the cuts of heartaches

./ jagged edges\.
was despairs dirt


...hurt...

Faint,
became of pleadings sound,

muddied palms,
weakened,
wiped away demises tears from

./debris filled eyes\.

...soul cries...

Battlefield of love,
she fended for self

...noone to console a shattered she...

...and she said

'' I remember when my heart broke,
I remember when I gave up loving you..
my heart couldn't take no more of you...
i'm so sad and lonely..''

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I Remember - Keyshia Cole

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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (01:38 PM)
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Date: 07/24/08 (01:44 PM)
Author: imperfect beauTy
Poem Title: ...and he said

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  HiS Cr4zY Be4u...
09/09/08 (09:28 PM) 
"BATTLEFiELD OF LOVE SHE FENDED FOR HERSELF" THOSE WORDS SAY iT ALL. EXACTLY HOW iT FEELS. EVERYTHiNG HURTS. YET YOU KEEP FiGHTiNG THE WAR. iF NOT FOR HiM, FOR OUR OWN SANiTY. LUV iT.

  Chocolate City
08/16/08 (04:44 PM) 
wow this was dep.. very emotional.. the word usage and the way u put em together made this........ sad... woow... nice job

  LiquidFire
08/16/08 (11:26 AM) 
No, no, no. Wow y am I about to cry, I swear heartbreaks never really mend, they just get puttied over, and the seal breaks loose and makes for wounds that hurt and bleed just the same as the day they were cut open. I'm so hating my ex right now! Grrrr lol

  LadyMay16
07/28/08 (01:19 PM) 
This was dark and lovely at the same time...I remember as well thats why I never gave up on love

  --->ROXIE<---
07/27/08 (12:22 AM) 
UGH!!! I LOVE HOW U INCOPERATED THE LYRICS INTO THE ENDING OF THIS....THIS SONG MAKES ME SO SAD...GUESS THATS WHY I ONLY LISTEN TO MY JAY-Z...LOL

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