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"an Astronomical Argument"
  by Harmony07
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Moon's Night by B. Rose


so....it rained today
The Sun Rose
as he normally does
but the Cloudz got all up in his face
So he got madd n started screamin
n roarin like an animal
hurt the Cloudz feelinz
n made em cry
n run away

Now The Moon illuminatez the Nite
but hez jealous of the Starz
cuz they shine brighter
n he'z madd @ Sun for not makin Him Lighter
so hez holla'in
n whinin thru the Wind
i wonder if he'll make the Cloudz cry again...
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Date Submitted: Oct 15, 2008 (01:36 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/15/08 (04:23 PM)
Author: Harmony07
Poem Title: Conflict in the Sky

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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  angeleyes1
11/13/08 (11:04 AM) 
very nicely responded you know how to create beautiful work keep flowing with your words much love

  lyric1985
11/13/08 (07:34 AM) 
very creative piece.... xoxoxoxox lyric

  XPERIENCE
11/13/08 (04:28 AM) 
very creative and i agree a hot response lil sis... loved the way u ended it..

  MAVRICK
11/01/08 (09:20 AM) 
a very creative write...well done.

  Cyn-Cyn
10/31/08 (01:52 PM) 
kool poem!

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