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"Am I wrong..."
  by Ye Cre


Am I wrong for telling you to >>> "GET THE HELL ON!"
When you showed me what I meant to you boo-boo.

Am I wrong to tell you to >>> "DAMNIT KICK ROCKS!"
When I have no more patience to play with you.

Am I wrong for not carrying this burden for >>> "US"
When you do nothing but c-U-r-S-e the "U/S" we be.

Am I wrong to stop waiting on >>> "A NEW BEGINNING"
When I lost myself putting up with your bull shyt.

Am I wrong for throwing in my towel >>> "OH HELL NAW!"
When you was shredding up my heart and my dignity.

Am I wrong to let you "ThinK" you had a spell on >>>"(LOL) ME"
When I was the foundation in your life trying to help you be alright.

Am I wrong for packing up all my belongings or better yet >>> "FUCC THAT SHYT"
When you should be moving your shyt up out this bitch far away from my ME.

Am I wrong to say to you Thank You for agreeing >>> "TO LET THIS QUEEN BE!"
When I let you be who YOU wanted to be too remember that always boo-boo!

AM I WRONG...
Thanks, You just witnessed a YE CreATION!
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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2008 (07:03 AM)
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  Ms. Hollywood
08/15/08 (10:01 PM) 
hell naw you aint wrong..lol.. if you ask me. you did what you was 'possed to do and other hand he or whomever didnt meet you half way so. hmm.. nothing else needs to be said but goodbye.

  Ms. Intellectu...
08/03/08 (03:24 AM) 
Wow...this is unqiue. It was a pleasure to read. The title of this poem my be I Am I wrong but you are right writing this for real.

  blessed92297
08/02/08 (03:23 PM) 
This was straight to the point. With just the right amount of venom. No, you are not wrong. It takes a strong person to 'Just Walk Away'. I enjoyed this YE CreATION

  ♥PoeticL...
07/30/08 (07:03 PM) 
Nah aint nothing wrong w/ that. Reminds me of my write "I fucking apologize". 10** Diva it is well deserved on this write

  Chocolatezeus
07/29/08 (09:28 AM) 
This is a great flow. Pulled it all out and slapped it on the table with this

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