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"Alone You Lay"
  by blessed92297
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Misstress by MsPoeticJustice




Last night he creeps in after 10
Having his way with you again

He made you Aah and Ooh for an hour
Then he left without even taking a shower

Is
this really all you want in a relationship
Someone coming in on the midnight shift

What about weekends and holidays
With his family he stays

Your left all along waiting by the phone
Listening to your sad, sad song

Why
Aren’t you the number one dish
Instead of the left out of the refrigerator fish

What value is he adding to your life
Except wet spots on the sheets and strife

So what if he throws you a dollar or two
No money can pay for the way he’s disrespecting you

When
He calls again on the phone
Tell that cheater to GO HOME


***I STAND ALONE STRONG***



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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (12:11 AM)
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  MzSpoon aka Th...
09/22/08 (04:11 AM) 
This is a powerful write, and it's truth...

  Quite
09/11/08 (01:28 AM) 
nice poem ur very talented and well gifted ma

  THE LISA
08/23/08 (03:01 PM) 
Somehow, both women lose. The wife losses each time he leaves and she is left to wonder why, and if, and the other woman loses because she is in a lose lose situation, and she too, is left to wonder why and if.

  King.Shadow(Le...
08/22/08 (11:54 PM) 
lovely... an instant fav.... 10 stars.... love the image and love the wordplay... nicely done...

  One
08/21/08 (02:26 AM) 
:O)...I love how you try to elevate others...always saying what the ladies need to hear...well done...

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