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"All yours"
  by Magnolia's Finest


Hello - Beyoncé



6'3
Brown Skin
With the sexiest smile I've ever seen...
Junior in high school....Everybody knew you
I remember it like it was yesterday...

August 28, 2003
That's when it all began...
I walked into the office to pick up my schedule
And there you were...
I saw you look at me...I turned my head before you could notice me looking too
So shy
A ball of nervousness...
I grabbed my papers and left

So strange that I remember all this
play by play
Don't think you ever knew it, but you had me from that day on....
I was so mesmorized by your eyes
That big joker smile
And them ears...lol....so adorable
Ever so often when I saw you walking
Down the hall...everything seemed to pause
Everyone said I had it bad and you were the cause
And my cure.....

Novemember 20th, 2003

I remember one day I was walking from gym
The day I daydreamed about happened
I walked right past you...Books in hand for my next class
Felt a tap..on my shoulder
And there you stood....
Could tell you didn't know what to say
your nerves were written all over your face
So you just handed me the note a walked away...

Note passing for days until we finally got the nerve to actually speak
We finally made it official
But it didn't last to too long
Mainly because of jealous bitches.....

The day you transfered broke my heart
But I was still mad at the fact you let stupid shit ruin what we could have had
So I held it in.....
I thought I'd never see or hear from you again......


3 years pass............

I'm 18
Graduated and ready for college
All grown up ....
Everything is going right for me

*ring ring ring*
Unexpectantly...Something I never dream...
It was you..."Hello"
Couldn't believe it I wanted to scream


From then on its been you and me
Bonnie and Clyde...Your ride or die....
You were all mine and I was always yours
All yours...
We support
Love and Respect each other
Never could asked for a better lover
Not just to my body, but my mind and my soul
I definitely see us growing old
Together
You hold the key to my heart
But you don't even need it....I give it all to you...

It funny how we started off
Lead to a happy ending
It's makes for one hell of a love story
And I'll have fun telling it to our kids and grandkids
And if God wills...Our great grandkids

For as long as I live
I want you right here
All mine...I'm all yours
Forever and always......







True story..........
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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2008 (03:41 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  MR. BYRD
12/21/08 (06:28 AM) 
great write partna...keep pushin that pen..real talk.....10 stars

  11th Wonduh
12/18/08 (08:00 PM) 
introduction, a timeline to love and happiness, very beautiful peek in the stages of innocence and love

  me-me
12/18/08 (07:50 PM) 
awwwwwwwwwwwww this is so sweet i love it a great write

  BxGrL
12/09/08 (11:18 PM) 
nic scribe......Great way of telling your story... am glad that your story has a happy ending....10

  Shy Gyrl
12/08/08 (12:43 AM) 
Your one of the lucky ones. Not too many can say they ended up with their HS crush/ interest/ boo/ whatever lol...awww....i wish u the BEST with this one, and enjoy every moment. the song is perfect love it myself:)

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