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"Addicted"
  by thereelest


I put my mind on a leash
Yet I still lost it
Then ran across it
In the back alley of Insanity
With it's friend, Scattered Thoughts
Shootin' up on past memories

So in the corner
There I left it and accepted
That once a junkie,
One always
And in a daze
I walked a block up the street
And guess who I meet?

A gorgeous young thang
By the name of Shattered Heart
In the school of hardknocks
While majorin in the art
Of capital gain
In exchange for pure pleasure
Being pimped by Raw Emotion
Who said no matter the weather
She'd be her umbrella
A lie she always tells
Leading Shattered Heart
Through the cold and bowels of Hell

But Shattered Heart won't turn away
Glimmers of Hope that still remain
Knocks on her door throughout the day
Opens it up
Begs Hope to stay
But Hope begins to dissipate
Now Shattered Heart gives into Hate
A monster whose destructions great
And now she's surely sealed her fate

Now shootin' up with my mind
And Raw Emotion close behind
It's no surprise that she finds
Herself
Back on the corner
Searchin for Love Donors
But none will ever come....
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Date Submitted: Aug 13, 2008 (11:59 AM)
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  MAVRICK
11/18/08 (08:25 PM) 
Shattered Heart is doomed unless she comes into an Harmonial agreement with Mind...excellent piece...love the concept...keep those thoughts strong

  Ordained Misfi...
10/07/08 (03:48 PM) 
Doesn't it seem like Shattered Heart comes at the worst time... Has us addicted to the pain. The lyrical content of the piece was FIYA

  Bre'
09/28/08 (07:11 PM) 
Told you I was coming back to comment so here I am... I've read this like 5 times and the only words I come up with are "well good god dang this chick is ridiculous(improvised) " lol... The friggin first stanza is Tough as ever... your flow is cancer man.. straight ILLLLL... gotta 10 it...

  --->ROXIE<---
09/02/08 (09:46 PM) 
LOVE DONORS...WHAT!!! U ARE LYRICALLY INSANE...WHERE THE FUCK HAVE U BEEN HIDING MA??? I AM IN LOVE WIT UR WRITES!!!

  ENNA
08/13/08 (12:37 PM) 
very good cant wait to read more ..enjoy in ur stay i see ur going to fit in

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