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"Acceptance"
  by One


Again....

She left me

...Again

Swiftly angering actually

...Again

& this time my arrogance falls
off of my shoulders like cloth

Again...

afterwards simulating a feeling of loss
stimulating thoughts

...Again

I'm wondering what was the cost
accepting I might be the cause

Again...

What's needling me now is
actually me

...Again

it always be about me

Arguing...

always be needing to be
... the boss

...Again

alone as always
aware this time I've Lost

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Date Submitted: Aug 21, 2008 (12:11 AM)
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  Ms. Sincerious
08/21/08 (12:04 PM) 
wow.. this is a saddening realization.. of which I can relate.. ive been on both sides of this sentiment before.. strong pen

  Blakfiya
08/21/08 (11:41 AM) 
Oh my... well, it always hits us harder when we believe that we are the reason things (relationships) end or undergo great change. Sometimes its just not in the cards.

  STYLES C.
08/21/08 (11:23 AM) 
An oddly familiar situation... A little to real for the kid

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
08/21/08 (10:46 AM) 
a lesson learned the hard way but paving a smoother path for the second time around . . .

  --->ROXIE<---
08/21/08 (08:30 AM) 
AWWW THIS WAS FUCKIN SAD PASS ME THE KNIFE SO I CAN KILL MYSELF! STOP BEING SO MEAN AND MAYBE SHE WOUN'T LEAVE NEXT TIME! *STICKS TOUNGUE AT U* JUST PLAYIN INE...BUT YEAH THIS WAS SAD!

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