Man!!!! Best one I've read thus far, and I'll tell you why... You came at this one honestly... Stating who you are, where you are, and what you lack... then you summed it up with the sum of who you are right now... a young man... Can't be mad at that. Great addition.
a young man that is able to look within himself can percieve his own insights and outlooks on life? please explain what u ment by this this i would like to see the authors explaination