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"A Real Ridah's Response"
  by Group: Certified Riders
  - This Poem is a response to the poem K!NG !z what you call D!p Certified by Group: D!pset poetry


looky here you illiterate fool
See what happens when you don't pay attention in school
I wrote my piece from the heart
your shit barely made any sense
I had a tough time reading it
got me over here laughing typing like a retard
fall back shorty
acting like you all hard
you really don't want me to pull ya card
Yous a poetry thug
Like glass I can see right thru
in to the heart of you
You ain't about riding
your ass is about hiding
behind a poetry website and as for retiring
never that son
You may have think you won
but for some reason i felt the need to address this directly
For blantantly disrespecting me
by penning that whack ass response piece
I suggest you cease
in other words quit while your ahead
feel my words chew thru you like slugs to the head
Your flow is weak
You type how you speak
You response is a laughing stock
go back to sucking cock
you just a beginner while I'm riding high at my peak
Your words had nothing to do with the theme of the original piece whatsoever
and you just think you're so clever
so what
you can string a few words that rhyme together
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Date Submitted: Nov 06, 2008 (03:22 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/06/08 (03:56 PM)
Author: Group: D!pset poetry
Poem Title: K!NG don't neva tru...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  Shaboogie
11/14/08 (02:12 PM) 
Damn i miss this group but it is what it is and I have no ill feelings towards none of my riders. NONE

  Demon of Darkn...
11/07/08 (08:52 AM) 
YEP DANG I KNOW YOU SAID YA SHITE AND BOY DEY BETTER TAKE NOTICE CUZ YOUR WORDS ARE FLY AND RIGHT UP TO DA POINT.. MASSIVE UPS DK

  ~*~QU33N~MA3~*...
11/07/08 (01:09 AM) 
*ROFL* killed em!!! them bytches dead lol

  Aphrodite
11/06/08 (06:53 PM) 
go head girl..that's definately what's up!!!

  CinCity
11/06/08 (03:52 PM) 
wooowww...hott!

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