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"A Raper's Wrath"
  by Arcane


Thugluv Challenge A picture is worth 1,000 words 13 lines, no more no less


He slithered slowly in the night,
Raping me of my innocence,
Shattering my dreams, leaving me a broken butterfly,
Left alone, speechless… without hope,
A barefoot young girl, colliding….running in this dreadful world,
To quiver and sink in the darkness of my shadows,
Locked my soul behind a vault, cloaked in isolation, feeling worthless beneath my feet,
As death shadows me throughout the night, echoing down the hall,
…A whisper of a cutters lullaby falling so gently upon my ears,
I run frantically seeking for answers, hoping to find the light,
A brighter star to remove the wrath,
And bloodstains that hide behind my heart, but I’m torn,
Left behind with only lifeless cries, to live only behind the shadows a raper’s wrath…



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Date Submitted: Jul 29, 2008 (10:58 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/29/08 (11:01 AM)
Author: Group: ThugLuv Poetry
Poem Title: A Raper's Wrath

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comment icon  COMMENTS (20)
  Quite
09/26/08 (09:35 PM) 
i just luv ur poetry very nicely put ma

  mindigoblue
08/14/08 (12:04 AM) 
this was even more poignant that the first. Touching me in ways that I'd rather not discuss. this kid of thing is difficult even when it's not about you or soeone you know so it's that muchmore difficult when it is you or a loved on. I feel you on this. Well done in 13 words.

  Doughboy
08/13/08 (08:51 AM) 
So deep....and emotional.... this on cant help but make you soul cry!! its so real !!!!

  King.Shadow(Le...
08/10/08 (05:23 AM) 
perfectly spoken another favorite the writing with the perfect picture to move along with it 10 stars

  Hank
08/07/08 (07:33 PM) 
This was some emtional shit here! It's tragic our women go through all these trumatic experiences, and fuck it up for the good guys!!

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