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"A peaceful song from within"
  by Don Lui
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Ballad Of A Fatherless Female by pozeup


As tears down your cheeks do glide
and even though you have had struggles inside
Let the Lord be your real guide

Forgiveness is the key to set you mind at ease
let the lords words sooth your soul like a cool summer breeze
Its true perfect imperfection which the lord does see
just set your mind free

free from the fears
free from the tears
And most of all free from the hate

Let the lord sing you a

peaceful song from within
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Date Submitted: Oct 02, 2008 (12:49 AM)
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  cocoadiva
10/04/08 (03:27 PM) 
i loved this poem it was touching and emotinal... it was soothing and filled with emotion... keep your pen flowing.. 10 starz.. excelent reply

  mjg
10/04/08 (12:17 PM) 
i like this one a good job nice write. 10 stars going to me fav.

  KaySoul
10/02/08 (04:54 AM) 
wow ... now this is why i subscribed to you...keep them coming, you inspire xxx one love

  ok
10/02/08 (01:20 AM) 
this is beautiful don lui such an uplifting message man thanks 4 the positive outlook

  pozeup
10/02/08 (12:57 AM) 
Aww, this is absolutely touching. "As tears down your cheeks do glide and even though you have had struggles inside Let the Lord be your real guide". You`re choice of words are very nice. Really good reply. Thanks a lot ! .. And now i am emotional. 10 stars.

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