GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Forum
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow itsnmysoul's PREVIOUS POEM itsnmysoul's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"a night's tale"
  by itsnmysoul


* this steams from a dream i had*
i read the letter slowly taking in every word....
it read:
dear damsel,
one cant deny you have my sons heart embezzled by
you virtues... but, mark my words..
don't let him die....

i thought on these things for awhile you were indeed my knight and with that came this responsibility you weighed heavily
when i was in need you saved me
from whateva..
this tine was no different a dragon had come to claim me..
you rode gallantly through the night hope to save me.. and break this dragon down..
you found me womb ed
the dragon approached from the left and you struck it in the side...
the dragon roared in anger you roared in fury..
but didn't let the beast be..
i had foreseen this.. and i screamed for you to retreaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttttttt
you ignored my flee and fought the monster..
stabbing at his throat.. trying to kill the fire inside..
the monster picked u up and rose high above my tower releasing letting the sea devour your body
i rushed to the scene you were dead and i couldn't do anything to change it
i cried...
blue white plasma that seep into your skin dividing you and your soul
the angel came and took you whole
i went to the highest peek and threw myself off the edge i didn't want to live if i didn't have you
i died
my soul had been restless for years until an angel came to me
he came to me and told me that my soul was to remain restless until judgement day..
i walked the earth grieving your lost till i finally found rest in the lake of fire
* this was a serious nightmare*
© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Dec 15, 2007 (06:32 PM)
search icon
Viewed: 72 times
user icon
Rating: Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 (2,173 Points)
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 0 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
 
key Log In to rate this poem or add it to your favorites.
 



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (0)

No poem responses yet. Click here to be the first!!

 


comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Mindfully Driv...
12/29/08 (07:37 PM) 
wow, this had my mind all ova the place...it felt like it was cut short...like theres more to be told or more to discover...but it was written really reallly well

  StraY12
11/13/08 (06:42 PM) 
I usually have dreams like this problem is when I wake up right away and think of somethin' else and automatically forget about it, other then that I says you got this down I can say I feel ya motives with this drop

  Philo
09/01/08 (04:56 PM) 
this was interesting to say the least, but i feel that there was a lot left unsaid. the poem left me with a lot of curious questions...mostly surrounding characters, motives, etc. either way, well written.

  Vocab Vixen ak...
08/22/08 (06:33 PM) 
Wow... that would be a Serious Dream... maybe i need put one of mine up.. when i do dream they are always nightmares.. and they stay with me even after i wake up bluring my reality.. This was another good write.. wonder what it is delving into...

  SlimCutta
12/15/07 (07:40 PM) 
Hmm seems to be some unfinished feelings and thoughts in this one...nice write.

Page(s): 1 
key Log In to rate or comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow itsnmysoul's PREVIOUS POEM itsnmysoul's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy