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"A Night in Paris"
  by Beautiful Soul


We Can Be New - Amel Larrieux

Stirring sensations
Idly slowly shifting illusion...al
Mirage

Phantasm fantasies soulfully
Blowing
Rapid recklessness
Wetting skin from heavenly rain

Star gazing
Atop
Towers of consciousness

Loving tones with foreseen tunes
Harmony
Gracefully moving in sweet delicate cotton

Wrapped up in
fragility
Tightly loose
Spreading supremacy

Weakly

Tasting earth’s bold rivers
Making passages for flowing seas
Vessels cruising

Drowning

Swimming straight sinking
Pre..liminary
Initially floating

Blinded by dark clouds
Brightly brilliantly happily
Falling in free secluded

freedom

Landing fiercely
Forcing bangs in between
Unfamiliar recognizable roars

Hushed… soundless

Exotic motions still dance
Scratching exterior shells
Emerging blaze rested
In rise of new elevated fury

Undiminished in calm
Night sky


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Date Submitted: Oct 01, 2008 (04:20 PM)
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  K.A.S. THE LYR...
10/18/08 (09:22 PM) 
VERY nice.........well done

  Jojo13
10/05/08 (11:37 PM) 
sensual, beautiful word choices - "familiar unrecognizable roars" "star gazing..." sounds like the perfect evening :)

  LiquidFire
10/02/08 (09:00 AM) 
*wondering, and lookin crazy at the same time* this reminds me of a symphony gone mad, everyone playing to their own tunes and the conductor is doin his own thing. But in the end it sounds beautiful. N I say that to say this was an organized chaotic write. and I am grasping for words to describe all that I'm feeling, but I can't. Forgive me.

  theycallmelife
10/02/08 (08:15 AM) 
Abstract in its most captivating shade...the mind wanders without care as to where it stops

  ButterflyDream
10/01/08 (11:22 PM) 
An absolutely beautiful write nothing left to be said 10 starzz

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