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"A Man...and his Woman"
A *F1* and jdbrown Collaboration


  *F1* BROWN:

Would you make love
If I was your girl
Your priceless jewel
Found at the end of the world?

Would you say yes
Should I ask for the love of your hips
Would you be willing to seduce my thoughts
With gentle kisses on my lips?

Would you make love
To the broken parts of me
Try to piece me back to love
Unconditionally?

Tell Me
Would you make love
JD?

  jdbrown:

I would make love to you
Because your love made me
You...

you were the one
That set my captured soul free

The things I would do for you
Are simply out of this world
I'd do what it takes so I.....
And only I

can call you my woman


I would bridge your gaps
And fill your broken canyons
To make us whole partners
And life-long companions

I'd remake Pluto a planet
If nine was your favorite number
I'd hold you tight at night
When we take our slumber

Bren, will you let me make love
To your thoughts and your spirits?

  *F1* BROWN:

My love,
It is not so much that I would let you
but that
it is what
I need of you

You have this gift of touch
with only your eyes
that can assure my body of the comfort of cashmere
You have a way with your words
that breaks barriers
built around a heart filled with doubt and fear

My mind says yes
My body screams yes
My future says yes

I am yours
You know my truths
Please JD
Break down the rest....

  jdbrown:

You know I care for you
At night I long for your soft touch
My heart beats the truth
Just seeing you is not enough

Leaving the envious ones with noses turned-up
They can't stand to see something so beautiful
They can't witness such a melodic, harmonious fuck
Love making that leaves us feeling so plentiful

Love this real only seen in the movies
Love like it was the honeymoon night
Except we never turned in our room keys
Where we spent the night gazing at the moonlight

Hearts and souls intertwined
A love deeper than just my girth
A man...and the love for HIS woman
A love like no other on this earth.

When A Man Loves A Woman - Michael Bolton
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Date Submitted: Nov 20, 2008 (12:39 PM)
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  PHILLY PRINCEZ...
11/21/08 (11:12 PM) 
good fucking job 10 stars

  Miss Self Suff...
11/20/08 (12:47 PM) 
Nice job you two!! 10*S

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