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"A LOVE OF MY OWN"
  by DCpoet34
  - This Poem is a response to the poem A Love Of My Own by OGSoldier4God


Some one I can talk to
After living through
Hellish days of paid slavery
An economy suffering
I would rather be alone than someone suffer me
A pain so deep
I day dream of sleep
And love does not love anybody
Love poems was my hobby
Now I write wishes to make known
A love of my own
Kisses that massage happiness into me
A smile that simply says "I am home"
Wishful thing is all I known
A love is what I wish for
I want my life to mean more
I need to find her
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Date Submitted: Nov 01, 2008 (11:44 PM)
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  Poetik Justus
12/28/08 (08:47 PM) 
geez, this is great; it's like the bow to the gift of the other poem; very distinctive but has the same purpose; great read

  Shaboogie
11/12/08 (01:25 PM) 
Find it withing urself my brotha. this was dope. "She" is most definitely out there u fill find her when u stop looking nah mean? 10 stars

  blaque
11/09/08 (07:37 PM) 
very nise response,definitely a beautiful write, really deep and heartfelt...10 plus-be blessed

  OGSoldier4God
11/02/08 (01:29 PM) 
Very Well Managed Accepted Response. You did a love of my own justice. i love the one line title in poem concept here!

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