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"A Great Moment..."
  by Snickaz


I stare at you in amazement,
Because you're so handsome,
And I must admit it,
You are the first one,
To really ever like me,
And it touches my soul,
The way you care for me,
You are so bold,
I like the way you make me feel,
And I'm happy that it's me you like to hold,
Staring into each others eyes,
I shyly look away,
You caress my chin,
Turn me back to you,
But to the floor my eyes stay,
You kiss my forehead and tell me not to be afraid,
But I can't help it,
I'm scared that this is fake,
And that my hopes will just have been played,
You whisper in my ear,
To asure me that you really care,
How much you want to be there,
And be the one to love and protect me,
I get a chill up my spin because not only are you close,
But your words get to me,
Your eyes are hazel,
The color of today,
I think it's amazing how they change colors natually,
Off subject I know,
But I'm too afraid to let you know,
Exactly how I feel,
...About you,
I mean I like you too,
But could it be true,
Could I be the girl,
To really capture someone like you?,
It's so confusing,
Because my past and present have always been filled with nothing,
But lonely nights and days,
And emotions that I couldn't let out astray,
In my own way,
I'm telling you that it's love,
But you come out and say it,
It sounds like heaven to my ears,
Your sweet sound saying those three words,
For so long I've searched,
For someone to love,
But never did I think of them sincerly loving me back,
I love you babygirl...,
The greatest words in the world,
You hold my waist with care,
As if I'm already your girl,
Your world,
Oh how I'm honored,
Kissing my neck so softly,
I'm still in a slight shock,
But when you turned me around,
And looked straight into my eyes,
I knew that I had found love finally,
The finishing touch,
You kissed my lips ever so gently,
I have found that one for me,
That perfect he.

last sip - joe ft mario
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Date Submitted: Aug 26, 2008 (03:44 AM)
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  K Giggles
08/26/08 (05:57 PM) 
Wow.... I really like this piece... Your imagery is amazing... piggy backing off of what "2DAMNREAL" said, these two pieces showed two sides of you and you portrayed them both beautifully.Keep scribblin

  Luck-E
08/26/08 (04:40 AM) 
i agree with both b4 me.. excellemt write.. this is a fav

  2DAMNREAL..A.K...
08/26/08 (04:34 AM) 
ah...the title just set up a beautiful piece...i liked the transition from that other piece...i saw 2 different side's of u queen..both very profound and beautiful...your a very intense queen..just need 2 find a way 2 Unleash it all..seem's writting is what suite's you 2!..keep it up..Nicholas Said it best...i look 4ward 2 reading more of your soul..Blessing's queen!

  King.Shadow(Le...
08/26/08 (04:31 AM) 
nice... sounds like a beautiful and an amazing great moment from this end... nice work here snickaz... a pleasure to view this write... 10 stars

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