what are you trying to do?? i give it back.. i need it.. another hit.. im bruised and you know it... you stop yelling ... noo you stop yelling!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you left me to drown in my own vomit.. im suffocating slowly.. deteriorating slowly..
noooooo!! donn't distance yourself from me. feel me.. come closer let me indulge... you again one last time..
let me feel you up with sweet sediments and love laced words..
HIT THAT.. inhale my love.. kiss me.. smoke me..
let me appeal to your better nature..
mr. you make me sick.. because you know damn well i love you..
you put the glass down mister.. you sip and savour and sip savour until there was none left..
now the bottle in empty amd in fiening..
i need a drink.
Get ME a fucking drink!!!!!!!!!
NO DONT TOUCH ME YOU CANT TELL IVE HAD ENOUGH...
BECAUSE I HAVENT... IVE BEEN PLAYED
YOU TRICKED ME
you whispered sweet thing and broke down my walls just to leave me again barren and broken.. hurting and wanting..
leave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i said leave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! don't speak just leave!!!!!!!!!!!!
o goodness chil'!!!!!! (clapping all crazy) everything about this was so crazy. the title caught my eye immediately but you definately backed it up. "let me fill you up with sweet sediments and love laced words" i think that was by far one of the sickest concepts ive seen. this is a favorite. beautifullly done ma
this feels almost like something i witnessed. i can't lie, it gets a lil confusing (hell the scenario i saw was just as confusing,) but u really brought out the actions and words of those that can't quite hold their 'poison'. and anything that'll have u acting and/or talking like a fool is indeed 'poison' in my eyes. well done.
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