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"A Date With Poetry"
by Level Aquanaut

She steps in the ink
and tip-toed across the page

Poetry she is..

I open my mind
and we express puppy love
for this connection..

I know she miss me
she loves it when I write her
even something short

I take her places
different than most people
she say she likes that

she wants me to show
my i-ma-gi-na-tion more
I just don't have time

I want her to see
that she is a part of me
as we walk and talk..

she understand, but
she pouts her lips to show me
she wants attention

I will write her more
nothing can come between us
we are together

Date Submitted: May 04, 2008 (02:09 AM)

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Date: 05/13/08 (03:48 PM)

Author: The Aquanaut

Poem Title: Viva La Poetry

COMMENTS (12)

Soul Lyrikal

07/30/08 (06:51 PM)

so glad my journey today brought me to you...I don't know how I missed such greatness!!!

LiquidFire

06/14/08 (10:20 PM)

Grin did i, yes i understand now even more from the second part to this. could it be that poetry is the truly the essence of me???? lol im joking, but i got that pout thing on lock *wink* in my head, i feel her, she tugs at my fingertips you know, she talks and talks and keeps fucking talking till i spill her out on the page and examine her like she wants because she revels in my scrutiny. loves it when i put her on display and at this moment i am her slave. doing her bidding at any hour of the ...
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Angel

06/05/08 (09:34 PM)

So this is where it all began? I absolutly love the imagery in the opening lines - her tip-toeing through ink across a page... very nice string of haiku.

Disoriented Di...

05/19/08 (05:30 PM)

aaaah i enjoyed this...love the background now onto...the next one..

Jody	05/11/08 (08:32 PM)

wait a minute, is Poetry cheating on me??? *screams* Poetry!!!!! Get your a$$ in the car and let's go! just loose, all over everybodies page like that. *smh, lol okay let me stop wildn... very nice Aq, personifying poetry like that. Kudos.

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