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"#1=First Love"
  by Lil Lexis
  - This Poem is a response to the poem 1..2..3..4.. by Lil Lexis


First love ..
A young love..
Together in a relationship we grew
Arguments and break ups
But in our hearts we always knew
That we were meant to be together
It's been 3 years together
Standing in sunshine now
Because we believe the weather
Made us strong
It's been so long
And yet you still remember
The first day you heard my voice
But now you listen to me
Talk about him
Because you don't have a choice
No choice
But to think about you
You will always be a part of my life
Your place in my heart is set
If we make it to 5 years we'll get married
And that's a bet
You would be the only name
I would get tatted on me
With no regret
Now as we get
Older.. Our love is deeper than it ever was
More mature
And it will never die because
You are a special part of me
And no one could really come above
First love...


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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (09:45 PM)
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  ♥Poetic~...
08/21/08 (01:00 AM) 
that first love *sighs* oh how i know that the first love is something special..

  KiNg-Go0B3r
08/20/08 (11:43 PM) 
sorry if i dont show too much emotion im way down

  KiNg-Go0B3r
08/20/08 (11:43 PM) 
i likes this alot boo

  B. Rose
08/20/08 (10:32 PM) 
I like this one yo... no matter the outcome of the first love... theres nothing like it yo...

  MZ.Philosophy
08/20/08 (10:27 PM) 
aww this was hot...i really like this piece sis...10 you already know

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